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someone once told me there are more stars than grains of sand I think about that a lot once when I was young I tried to count all the sand on the beach I gave up at 72 last night I tried to count all the stars I gave up when they were no longer stars but instead the freckles in your irises I gave up at 2 someone once told me there are more atoms in a human than there are stars when I met you I began counting your atoms and even when I've counted all the ones between your fingers and behind your ears and in your ribcage I won't give up on you
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Jan 12, 2014
Jan 12, 2014 at 4:39 PM UTC
more stars than sand
someone once told me there are more stars than grains of sand I think about that a lot once when I was young I tried to count all the sand on the beach I gave up at 72 last night I tried to count all the stars I gave up when they were no longer stars but instead the freckles in your irises I gave up at 2 someone once told me there are more atoms in a human than there are stars when I met you I began counting your atoms and even when I've counted all the ones between your fingers and behind your ears and in your ribcage I won't give up on you
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Jan 12, 2014
Jan 12, 2014 at 4:39 PM UTC
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