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Often people, mesmerised by the depth of others, comment that they had no idea they had so many layers, that such profundity existed. I have myself been likened to a coconut with a hard shell, with undiscovered realms within. Hah. I think perhaps though, that I am more of an onion. You can peel all that you want but -I'm just the same inside. Maybe I could even make you cry.
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Aug 1, 2014
Aug 1, 2014 at 10:11 AM UTC
Onion-girl
Often people, mesmerised by the depth of others, comment that they had no idea they had so many layers, that such profundity existed. I have myself been likened to a coconut with a hard shell, with undiscovered realms within. Hah. I think perhaps though, that I am more of an onion. You can peel all that you want but -I'm just the same inside. Maybe I could even make you cry.
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Aug 1, 2014
Aug 1, 2014 at 10:11 AM UTC
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