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Someone special Della’s mother told her. A Downs with a lovely smile and bright, slightly narrow eyes. She had waited outside the school grounds when her mother drove up. Sorry I’m late, her mother said, got caught in the traffic. Della frowned, her tongue sitting on her lower lip. Man said you sent him, Della said. What man? Man in a car. What man in a car? Della looked at her mother, puzzled. Man in the car. What did he say? Said you sent him to pick me up. Called me Dearie. But I’m Della. Her mother got out of the car and went and knelt down beside her daughter. You didn’t get in the car did you? No he drove off fast when Mrs Penbridge came over. He said I was Dearie, but I’m Della. Yes, you are. Not Dearie. No not Dearie. He smiled at me. You mustn’t get in to a stranger’s car unless I tell you it’s all right. I didn’t get in. Good. He drove off, Della said, lowering her eyes to her new shoes. He smiled. Yes, but that doesn’t mean he was nice. He seemed nice. Yes, but men like that aren’t. Why? Della looked at her mother. Because he may have hurt you. Why would he hurt me, I’m special. Yes, you are special. You are angry with me. No, not with you. You’ve got your angry voice. Not with you. Seems angry with me. Not you, the man. Why are you angry with the man? Because he may have taken you away from me. Della looked at her mother’s hair, newly done. Where? Where would he have taken me? Away from me. Why? Because he’s bad. Her mother held Della to her tightly. He didn’t look bad, he had a nice smile. Nice car, too. Blue. Nice blue. Like a summer sky blue. Never get in a stranger’s car. Never. You are angry. Not with you. Sounds angry. But not with you. Not with me? No, you are special. Special. Yes. Very special? Yes, very special. Not to get in a stranger’s car? No. Not in a stranger’s car. I got in your friend’s car the other day. What friend? The man who brings your groceries and you and he talk and he makes you laugh. Her mother stared. When did you get in his car? The other day. Why did you get in his car? He said, you said. Did he drive off with you? Yes. The mother held Della out in front of her. Where to? We went to look at the ducks in the pond. Why did you get in the car? He said, you said. But I didn’t tell him that. He said, you said. Did he touch you? Touch me? Did he touch you anywhere? He held my hand to go to the ducks. Anywhere else? He said I was special. You are. Did he touch you anywhere? My hand. Anywhere else? No. Just my hand to feed the ducks. What happened after you saw the ducks? He said I was special. Where did he drive you? I thought Mrs Rice was going to pick you up that day? I went with your friend. Did he touch you? He held my hand. Anywhere else? Della shook her head. He said I was pretty and had nice legs. Her mother’s heart thumped. Am I pretty? Yes you are, but he shouldn’t have said so. Why not? He didn’t mean it nicely. Why? Because he shouldn’t tell you that. Why? Because he’s no right to say you’re pretty. You say I’m pretty. I love you. He said I was pretty and had nice legs. Did he touch your legs? No he just looked at them. Nice legs he said and nice eyes. Have I got nice legs and eyes? Yes you have but he shouldn’t say so. You’re angry again. Not with you. Seems like me. It’s not. Seems like. I’m not. Seems like. Never get in his car again. Della looked at the sky. I won’t. It looked like rain.
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Dec 19, 2013
Dec 19, 2013 at 12:17 AM UTC
LOOKED LIKE RAIN.
Someone special Della’s mother told her. A Downs with a lovely smile and bright, slightly narrow eyes. She had waited outside the school grounds when her mother drove up. Sorry I’m late, her mother said, got caught in the traffic. Della frowned, her tongue sitting on her lower lip. Man said you sent him, Della said. What man? Man in a car. What man in a car? Della looked at her mother, puzzled. Man in the car. What did he say? Said you sent him to pick me up. Called me Dearie. But I’m Della. Her mother got out of the car and went and knelt down beside her daughter. You didn’t get in the car did you? No he drove off fast when Mrs Penbridge came over. He said I was Dearie, but I’m Della. Yes, you are. Not Dearie. No not Dearie. He smiled at me. You mustn’t get in to a stranger’s car unless I tell you it’s all right. I didn’t get in. Good. He drove off, Della said, lowering her eyes to her new shoes. He smiled. Yes, but that doesn’t mean he was nice. He seemed nice. Yes, but men like that aren’t. Why? Della looked at her mother. Because he may have hurt you. Why would he hurt me, I’m special. Yes, you are special. You are angry with me. No, not with you. You’ve got your angry voice. Not with you. Seems angry with me. Not you, the man. Why are you angry with the man? Because he may have taken you away from me. Della looked at her mother’s hair, newly done. Where? Where would he have taken me? Away from me. Why? Because he’s bad. Her mother held Della to her tightly. He didn’t look bad, he had a nice smile. Nice car, too. Blue. Nice blue. Like a summer sky blue. Never get in a stranger’s car. Never. You are angry. Not with you. Sounds angry. But not with you. Not with me? No, you are special. Special. Yes. Very special? Yes, very special. Not to get in a stranger’s car? No. Not in a stranger’s car. I got in your friend’s car the other day. What friend? The man who brings your groceries and you and he talk and he makes you laugh. Her mother stared. When did you get in his car? The other day. Why did you get in his car? He said, you said. Did he drive off with you? Yes. The mother held Della out in front of her. Where to? We went to look at the ducks in the pond. Why did you get in the car? He said, you said. But I didn’t tell him that. He said, you said. Did he touch you? Touch me? Did he touch you anywhere? He held my hand to go to the ducks. Anywhere else? He said I was special. You are. Did he touch you anywhere? My hand. Anywhere else? No. Just my hand to feed the ducks. What happened after you saw the ducks? He said I was special. Where did he drive you? I thought Mrs Rice was going to pick you up that day? I went with your friend. Did he touch you? He held my hand. Anywhere else? Della shook her head. He said I was pretty and had nice legs. Her mother’s heart thumped. Am I pretty? Yes you are, but he shouldn’t have said so. Why not? He didn’t mean it nicely. Why? Because he shouldn’t tell you that. Why? Because he’s no right to say you’re pretty. You say I’m pretty. I love you. He said I was pretty and had nice legs. Did he touch your legs? No he just looked at them. Nice legs he said and nice eyes. Have I got nice legs and eyes? Yes you have but he shouldn’t say so. You’re angry again. Not with you. Seems like me. It’s not. Seems like. I’m not. Seems like. Never get in his car again. Della looked at the sky. I won’t. It looked like rain.
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Dec 19, 2013
Dec 19, 2013 at 12:17 AM UTC
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