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The ice was only one night old. Why did I skate so hastily? It couldn't hold me, it gave way. But now my heart is frozen over.
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Dec 23, 2025
Dec 23, 2025 at 6:09 PM UTC
Ice
The ice was only one night old. Why did I skate so hastily? It couldn't hold me, it gave way. But now my heart is frozen over.
My last date rejected me very unexpectedly.
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19/M/Netherlands
Dec 23, 2025
Dec 23, 2025 at 6:09 PM UTC
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