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I hit you so hard I quivered inside But I was glad to see you were finally listening Hearing at least what I felt you should be doing through the sting of my touch I watched the fear and betrayed look in your eyes I had your attention You would do as I said Now Why do you make me hit you You know I care about and for you Would lay my life on any line - train or moral for your happiness and safety would go any lengths dark and dangerous valleys compromising myself as long as I knew you would be fine You know that I love you this is why you test me so that set stubborn look in your eye as you dare not speak or answer me back I will not have such disrespect not from you not after all i have done and will do for you You will not defy me in your tongue for i will never understand much less forgive you and you will not last very long without my favor you will feel the pain of my letting you go refusal to even look at you long before i ever leave the room so hear me, heed me, appreciate the fervor that i pursue you for you longing only for you acquiescence plainly for your normal self the sparkle and regard as a fair response to my brand of discipline
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Jan 15, 2011
Jan 15, 2011 at 8:03 AM UTC
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I hit you so hard I quivered inside But I was glad to see you were finally listening Hearing at least what I felt you should be doing through the sting of my touch I watched the fear and betrayed look in your eyes I had your attention You would do as I said Now Why do you make me hit you You know I care about and for you Would lay my life on any line - train or moral for your happiness and safety would go any lengths dark and dangerous valleys compromising myself as long as I knew you would be fine You know that I love you this is why you test me so that set stubborn look in your eye as you dare not speak or answer me back I will not have such disrespect not from you not after all i have done and will do for you You will not defy me in your tongue for i will never understand much less forgive you and you will not last very long without my favor you will feel the pain of my letting you go refusal to even look at you long before i ever leave the room so hear me, heed me, appreciate the fervor that i pursue you for you longing only for you acquiescence plainly for your normal self the sparkle and regard as a fair response to my brand of discipline
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Jan 15, 2011
Jan 15, 2011 at 8:03 AM UTC
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