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At 11 AM, I awoke and went to inform my mother that the day was timeless. I then sat amongst it and waited for the thing to recommence/ It didn't. Later, I found myself in aisle no. 5 (an obligation valued before the supposed ceasing of time), becoming - !desperado! in aisle no. 5, 5 for baking, because baking is community, comfort, a kiss on the forehead, a dream. Disgusted by the lighting of the place, I hurried with my business, out and past the parking lot people who appeared quite oblivious to this state of affairs. One glanced at me, but my aisle 5 eyes took care of the situation. I woke up in the car, tried my hardest to ignore the fakeness of the dash clock, and pulled _out_ into the road, leaving aisle 5 behind in some pop-up book land of apparent responsibility. And cried, as it is oh so weary to crave death in a place so meant for life.    ∞
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Oct 6, 2017
Oct 6, 2017 at 9:13 PM UTC
how to describe the feeling of nothing
At 11 AM, I awoke and went to inform my mother that the day was timeless. I then sat amongst it and waited for the thing to recommence/ It didn't. Later, I found myself in aisle no. 5 (an obligation valued before the supposed ceasing of time), becoming - !desperado! in aisle no. 5, 5 for baking, because baking is community, comfort, a kiss on the forehead, a dream. Disgusted by the lighting of the place, I hurried with my business, out and past the parking lot people who appeared quite oblivious to this state of affairs. One glanced at me, but my aisle 5 eyes took care of the situation. I woke up in the car, tried my hardest to ignore the fakeness of the dash clock, and pulled _out_ into the road, leaving aisle 5 behind in some pop-up book land of apparent responsibility. And cried, as it is oh so weary to crave death in a place so meant for life.    ∞
from summer- im awful at narrativey things, but
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Oct 6, 2017
Oct 6, 2017 at 9:13 PM UTC
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