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I wish that you could hear my voice. I wish that you could hear my thoughts. This pain is like a bullet to my chest, and I feel so alone. Can we find a way to make this work? Can we try to keep this fire from dying? How can I live without your angelic form beside me? Sometimes I wish I had gone, gone far away. Hidden, from the truth. Masked away the pain. What would you do if I just walked away? Would you stay? Here with me? Is this love or is it lust? I can never tell. I thought that this could have been different. When we met that day. You were like a shooting star, just waiting to fall down. And I waited for that moment when I thought that this love could bloom. This could be a fairy tale waiting to happen. All this is, is my attempt at love. I don’t do it for excitement or for fulfillment. Or even a reputation. I do it from the heart, and that’s all that matters.
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Jan 26, 2013
Jan 26, 2013 at 12:42 AM UTC
My Attempt at Love (draft)
I wish that you could hear my voice. I wish that you could hear my thoughts. This pain is like a bullet to my chest, and I feel so alone. Can we find a way to make this work? Can we try to keep this fire from dying? How can I live without your angelic form beside me? Sometimes I wish I had gone, gone far away. Hidden, from the truth. Masked away the pain. What would you do if I just walked away? Would you stay? Here with me? Is this love or is it lust? I can never tell. I thought that this could have been different. When we met that day. You were like a shooting star, just waiting to fall down. And I waited for that moment when I thought that this love could bloom. This could be a fairy tale waiting to happen. All this is, is my attempt at love. I don’t do it for excitement or for fulfillment. Or even a reputation. I do it from the heart, and that’s all that matters.
Draft of recent poem.
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Jan 26, 2013
Jan 26, 2013 at 12:42 AM UTC
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