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Mid October takes its end of season's leap into the solitude of post-tourism autumn. The landscape shows its truer face to celebrate the reassembly of local solidarity. Tat and trim tucked into hibernation, chalkboards erased, scant takings totaled, inflatables deflated. Unsold crafts packed between pages of yesterday's 'Correio de Manha' Shocked freezers stand open-mouthed their diet of ice dwindled to a thin trickle. Sunshades collapse in deep south style, redundant loungers relax supine. Kids slope back to school - a mule-train of shoe-scrapers packed to the hilt dawdles through warming scents of post-salad indulgence, sweet with the street-aroma of 'feijoada', garlic, and  aromatic oregano pot-grown in a back plot, littered with discarded placards and tired bikes. Past men leaning doors, unsure of new routines, idle hands and minds with new time to fill mostly in cold bars for warm camaraderie. Women pick fitfully at quiet-season's crochet squatting to gossip under a white wash slung and pegged, stick-sure against thin bleached facades. Under Planes, old comrades congregate shuffling at a make-shift table, tired eyes set on cards, playing for cents under a limited sky once defined by Salazar. Car parks thin. Beneath the russet canopies street-sweepers scorn a reckless wind, where still sun-crisp leaves gather in gutters, thirstily anticipating the first deluge under autumn's gathering clouds. copyright © Caroline Grace 2011
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Oct 11, 2011
Oct 11, 2011 at 7:13 AM UTC
Closing time.
Mid October takes its end of season's leap into the solitude of post-tourism autumn. The landscape shows its truer face to celebrate the reassembly of local solidarity. Tat and trim tucked into hibernation, chalkboards erased, scant takings totaled, inflatables deflated. Unsold crafts packed between pages of yesterday's 'Correio de Manha' Shocked freezers stand open-mouthed their diet of ice dwindled to a thin trickle. Sunshades collapse in deep south style, redundant loungers relax supine. Kids slope back to school - a mule-train of shoe-scrapers packed to the hilt dawdles through warming scents of post-salad indulgence, sweet with the street-aroma of 'feijoada', garlic, and  aromatic oregano pot-grown in a back plot, littered with discarded placards and tired bikes. Past men leaning doors, unsure of new routines, idle hands and minds with new time to fill mostly in cold bars for warm camaraderie. Women pick fitfully at quiet-season's crochet squatting to gossip under a white wash slung and pegged, stick-sure against thin bleached facades. Under Planes, old comrades congregate shuffling at a make-shift table, tired eyes set on cards, playing for cents under a limited sky once defined by Salazar. Car parks thin. Beneath the russet canopies street-sweepers scorn a reckless wind, where still sun-crisp leaves gather in gutters, thirstily anticipating the first deluge under autumn's gathering clouds. copyright © Caroline Grace 2011
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Oct 11, 2011
Oct 11, 2011 at 7:13 AM UTC
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