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some days the sun shines some days the sky pours out on us and before that all the dawn's good light goes why bother asking you why all you know is that it ought to be blue but buildings always turn to gray up high so how wrong can you be? don't lie to me don't come crying to me about all of your mistakes i'm done with your problems done being your solution, sounding board for bigger better things i'm done with this done with all of your **** done being what you have to kick around this building aint well structured and we're the ivy falling off the sides to find a better place for all our roots and shoots up in sidewalks are better your AC was so dry your humors outdated you're problems all too trite why the hell would i put up with that? don't lie to me don't come crying to me about all of your mistakes i'm done with your problems done being your solution, sounding board for bigger better things i'm done with this done with all of your **** done being what you have to kick around if it rains it pours with you cant see the sunset for the clouds cant be all that i supported i'll be done with you and all your failings too done with all your mistakes and tears goodnight goodbye i'm done being your own **** up don't you dare lie to me i'm done with your problems done being your solution, sounding board for bigger better things done being what you have to kick around done being what you have to kick around.
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Mar 13, 2014
Mar 13, 2014 at 6:53 PM UTC
see you soon (except i only wanna vist hell)
some days the sun shines some days the sky pours out on us and before that all the dawn's good light goes why bother asking you why all you know is that it ought to be blue but buildings always turn to gray up high so how wrong can you be? don't lie to me don't come crying to me about all of your mistakes i'm done with your problems done being your solution, sounding board for bigger better things i'm done with this done with all of your **** done being what you have to kick around this building aint well structured and we're the ivy falling off the sides to find a better place for all our roots and shoots up in sidewalks are better your AC was so dry your humors outdated you're problems all too trite why the hell would i put up with that? don't lie to me don't come crying to me about all of your mistakes i'm done with your problems done being your solution, sounding board for bigger better things i'm done with this done with all of your **** done being what you have to kick around if it rains it pours with you cant see the sunset for the clouds cant be all that i supported i'll be done with you and all your failings too done with all your mistakes and tears goodnight goodbye i'm done being your own **** up don't you dare lie to me i'm done with your problems done being your solution, sounding board for bigger better things done being what you have to kick around done being what you have to kick around.
"it was not a well-structured form and we felt like climbing ivy falling off the sides." was the first line I came up with, the thesis if you will.
cherri-cola
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Mar 13, 2014
Mar 13, 2014 at 6:53 PM UTC
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