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Your words sting like vinegar when spilled on open wounds They carve their way into me like eating ice cream with a spoon Like lemonade thats sugar free they have a bitter taste but unlike health warnings on cigarettes their message goes not to waste As with most recipe disasters like when I cooked Fish Ragu I'm not sure where I got things wrong just what exactly did I do?
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Aug 22, 2010
Aug 22, 2010 at 9:32 AM UTC
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Your words sting like vinegar when spilled on open wounds They carve their way into me like eating ice cream with a spoon Like lemonade thats sugar free they have a bitter taste but unlike health warnings on cigarettes their message goes not to waste As with most recipe disasters like when I cooked Fish Ragu I'm not sure where I got things wrong just what exactly did I do?
a-thomas-hawkins
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Aug 22, 2010
Aug 22, 2010 at 9:32 AM UTC
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