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O O O O ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~O~~~~~~ O --------- The above is my rendition of a famous DUCHAMP painting entitled SUN DESCENDING OVER THE WATER --------- Lovers The silken semblance of true embrace She leaves she returns 1000 lives in every vision 1000 strong the children are before the tide •• I read your mopey weepy poems of love gone wrong! I laugh at all the tears you pretend to cry For Love is not so weak ! Love is not born nor can it die •• Perhaps you have been watching too many phony videos on MTV ! How is it you treat love like you are " gunning them down" as if you are playing a video game !! •• Oh such funny funny love ! Weird as can be ! •• The mother races into the fire to save the child The father stands guard at war's gate The young boy and girl walk proudly thru any and every form of hate and stand together Unpossessively •• You write of love trapped and wrapped in ugly jealousies ! (CRAZY KIDS !) •• Well Here we are again One of the 1000 visions Here we are STRONG OR WEAK •• Only love is real Always true Can't be faked
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Apr 3, 2014
Apr 3, 2014 at 11:21 PM UTC
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O O O O ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~O~~~~~~ O --------- The above is my rendition of a famous DUCHAMP painting entitled SUN DESCENDING OVER THE WATER --------- Lovers The silken semblance of true embrace She leaves she returns 1000 lives in every vision 1000 strong the children are before the tide •• I read your mopey weepy poems of love gone wrong! I laugh at all the tears you pretend to cry For Love is not so weak ! Love is not born nor can it die •• Perhaps you have been watching too many phony videos on MTV ! How is it you treat love like you are " gunning them down" as if you are playing a video game !! •• Oh such funny funny love ! Weird as can be ! •• The mother races into the fire to save the child The father stands guard at war's gate The young boy and girl walk proudly thru any and every form of hate and stand together Unpossessively •• You write of love trapped and wrapped in ugly jealousies ! (CRAZY KIDS !) •• Well Here we are again One of the 1000 visions Here we are STRONG OR WEAK •• Only love is real Always true Can't be faked
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Apr 3, 2014
Apr 3, 2014 at 11:21 PM UTC
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