When I'm with you
I feel so great,
When I'm with you
I'm on a date.
You hand me a present
I widen my eyes,
I start to open it
You yell “Surprise!”
Upon my hand
Lay a beautiful ring case,
You bend down on your knees
And look at my face.
In surprise
I look at you,
You look at me
I say “I do!”
Now when I'm with you
I'll feel even greater,
Now when I'm with you
We won't have to tip our waiter.
So let's leave this place
And go back home
Cause now we both know,
We won't be alone.
So now I feel
Like I'm in love,
Cause now I feel
Like I'm a dove.
Now I'm flying off
Onto another land,
With you by my side
And holding my hand.
But when I wake up
I give a loud “sigh”,
Cause I just realized
That it was just a dream that flew on by.
But now when I'm with you
I'll feel so great,
And when I'm with you
I'll know it was fate.
(Written in 7th Grade and
the first poem I had ever written
by myself)
Aug 13, 2012
Aug 13, 2012 at 3:49 AM UTC
When I'm with you
I feel so great,
When I'm with you
I'm on a date.
You hand me a present
I widen my eyes,
I start to open it
You yell “Surprise!”
Upon my hand
Lay a beautiful ring case,
You bend down on your knees
And look at my face.
In surprise
I look at you,
You look at me
I say “I do!”
Now when I'm with you
I'll feel even greater,
Now when I'm with you
We won't have to tip our waiter.
So let's leave this place
And go back home
Cause now we both know,
We won't be alone.
So now I feel
Like I'm in love,
Cause now I feel
Like I'm a dove.
Now I'm flying off
Onto another land,
With you by my side
And holding my hand.
But when I wake up
I give a loud “sigh”,
Cause I just realized
That it was just a dream that flew on by.
But now when I'm with you
I'll feel so great,
And when I'm with you
I'll know it was fate.
(Written in 7th Grade and
the first poem I had ever written
by myself)
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