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Cold, cold floors press against the soles of my feet, as I roll out of bed still affined to my sleep. While my eyes remain low and quite dauntingly heavy, my hands moving slow part them ever so stiffly. Then, before me a speech, spoken only in vision, brings tears to mine eyes by its glorious image. Alive yet again, the sight gives me relief, for the glorious sun shan't deliver disbelief.
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Oct 21, 2011
Oct 21, 2011 at 2:58 PM UTC
My Adopted Metaphor
Cold, cold floors press against the soles of my feet, as I roll out of bed still affined to my sleep. While my eyes remain low and quite dauntingly heavy, my hands moving slow part them ever so stiffly. Then, before me a speech, spoken only in vision, brings tears to mine eyes by its glorious image. Alive yet again, the sight gives me relief, for the glorious sun shan't deliver disbelief.
My adopted metaphor is "deliver disbelief."
christopher-tolleson
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Oct 21, 2011
Oct 21, 2011 at 2:58 PM UTC
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