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She was only a child, 
 Tranquil in the distance,
 Didn’t know a thing about love.
 You came, and with just a subtle effort,
 She let you in. Innocence became thinner,
 Established a lot of 
firsts. Every action led to a downward slope. 
“At last! Someone loves me,” she thought. You made her want to see every light of dawn. She thought wrong. She was just a child,
 Tranquil in the distance,
 Didn’t know a thing about love.
 That’s why she never got the chance, To differentiate receiving someone’s love, From feeding on broken trust. Blinded by her feelings,
 Fooled by your words,
 Suppressed her senses to the inevitable,
 Confined herself in the “us” world. She was still a child,
 Yet, you ruined her tranquility.
 She didn’t know a thing about love,
 So you gave her falsity.
 You came and made an elusive effort,
 For her to let you in, 
 Then left her to wonder, 
“Did I love you wrongly?”
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Jan 27, 2015
Jan 27, 2015 at 4:35 AM UTC
Did I Love You Wrongly?
She was only a child, 
 Tranquil in the distance,
 Didn’t know a thing about love.
 You came, and with just a subtle effort,
 She let you in. Innocence became thinner,
 Established a lot of 
firsts. Every action led to a downward slope. 
“At last! Someone loves me,” she thought. You made her want to see every light of dawn. She thought wrong. She was just a child,
 Tranquil in the distance,
 Didn’t know a thing about love.
 That’s why she never got the chance, To differentiate receiving someone’s love, From feeding on broken trust. Blinded by her feelings,
 Fooled by your words,
 Suppressed her senses to the inevitable,
 Confined herself in the “us” world. She was still a child,
 Yet, you ruined her tranquility.
 She didn’t know a thing about love,
 So you gave her falsity.
 You came and made an elusive effort,
 For her to let you in, 
 Then left her to wonder, 
“Did I love you wrongly?”
Clandestine-chase
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Jan 27, 2015
Jan 27, 2015 at 4:35 AM UTC
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