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First I’ll change his eyes from brown to green because I’d rather be reminded of the algae in the pond than the bourbon on his tongue. I’ll say pond when I mean lake because I prefer the intimacy of lily pads. I can say things like *he offered love like it was lemonade, fresh-squeezed and innocent,* because then the idea won’t seem so foreign. And then it won’t seem so dishonest when dragonflies become hummingbirds because I envy their tunneling nature. I can pretend that they drilled a hole in the sky where we can live out the lives I’ve forged for us through poetry, where we are together every time.
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Aug 7, 2010
Aug 7, 2010 at 10:48 AM UTC
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First I’ll change his eyes from brown to green because I’d rather be reminded of the algae in the pond than the bourbon on his tongue. I’ll say pond when I mean lake because I prefer the intimacy of lily pads. I can say things like *he offered love like it was lemonade, fresh-squeezed and innocent,* because then the idea won’t seem so foreign. And then it won’t seem so dishonest when dragonflies become hummingbirds because I envy their tunneling nature. I can pretend that they drilled a hole in the sky where we can live out the lives I’ve forged for us through poetry, where we are together every time.
alexandra-carlyle
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Aug 7, 2010
Aug 7, 2010 at 10:48 AM UTC
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