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Hadn’t changed numbers. A voice bristled in my ear, said why not then, it’s been years. Months passed. An amalgam of frail strained hearts, smells on pillows we tried to lose. Chose the boulevard in the end, gaudy nostalgia blazing like a forest fire in my eyes. I waited. Ran a finger over rails those skaters we knew marked, back when something called lust fizzled between you them and me, through the airwaves; the lyrics can still trickle on my tongue if you ask nicely. Peroxide-blondes, men with muscles the size of marrows, a summer pick ‘n’ mix lacking in looks, in fine taste. Went to read a book in the sea for a while, slurped up half a pint in chapters then lost the plot again. That’s when you came in polka dots, a pack of colourful taffy swinging idly from a wrist, peanut-butter cups like lily-pads on your palm. As if you’d never left, same number, name, face. Forgot what goodbye was, tripped over a lost hello.
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Nov 20, 2014
Nov 20, 2014 at 5:30 PM UTC
Polka Dots
Hadn’t changed numbers. A voice bristled in my ear, said why not then, it’s been years. Months passed. An amalgam of frail strained hearts, smells on pillows we tried to lose. Chose the boulevard in the end, gaudy nostalgia blazing like a forest fire in my eyes. I waited. Ran a finger over rails those skaters we knew marked, back when something called lust fizzled between you them and me, through the airwaves; the lyrics can still trickle on my tongue if you ask nicely. Peroxide-blondes, men with muscles the size of marrows, a summer pick ‘n’ mix lacking in looks, in fine taste. Went to read a book in the sea for a while, slurped up half a pint in chapters then lost the plot again. That’s when you came in polka dots, a pack of colourful taffy swinging idly from a wrist, peanut-butter cups like lily-pads on your palm. As if you’d never left, same number, name, face. Forgot what goodbye was, tripped over a lost hello.
Written: November 2014. Explanation: A poem written over the course of one evening. The idea came to me after seeing a photo online of a girl in a polka-dot bathing suit. It don't feel it is part of my beach/sea series, but that may change. 'Taffy' candies are more commonly known as 'chews' in the UK, while 'pick 'n' mix' is similar to what the US call 'penny candy'. As for the 'peanut-butter cups'... they are known as 'Reese's Peanut Butter Cups' worldwide... my name is spelled slightly different, but anyway. Immensely happy with this poem, considerably more so than anything I've written in a while. Feedback very welcome and appreciated as always.
reece-aj-chambers
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33/M/English
Nov 20, 2014
Nov 20, 2014 at 5:30 PM UTC
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