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i. In your arms, I felt like a child Not a woman. Listened to warmth, the Tin raindrops outside and this Bright light. Accepted it and laid on you. Worn Like the Midwest flatlands, many arid miles longing terribly To comprehend, I can’t. A glimpse of the shadows Of the mind in the day of you: Stripped and tender, Raw. I bury my head Like a child. ----------------------------------------(alternate version) ii. Like a woman – like a child In your arms – (is) – raw I bury my head. I feel like child. Listened to the warmth of Tin raindrops outside and this – stripped and tender Worn, the mind in the day of you Bright light like the many arid miles Like the Midwest flatlands, longing terribly To comprehend. Accept it and laid on you.
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Nov 25, 2015
Nov 25, 2015 at 2:07 PM UTC
like a child
i. In your arms, I felt like a child Not a woman. Listened to warmth, the Tin raindrops outside and this Bright light. Accepted it and laid on you. Worn Like the Midwest flatlands, many arid miles longing terribly To comprehend, I can’t. A glimpse of the shadows Of the mind in the day of you: Stripped and tender, Raw. I bury my head Like a child. ----------------------------------------(alternate version) ii. Like a woman – like a child In your arms – (is) – raw I bury my head. I feel like child. Listened to the warmth of Tin raindrops outside and this – stripped and tender Worn, the mind in the day of you Bright light like the many arid miles Like the Midwest flatlands, longing terribly To comprehend. Accept it and laid on you.
kt-mccurdy
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Nov 25, 2015
Nov 25, 2015 at 2:07 PM UTC
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