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Abandoned like an unloved pet just outside the outskirts of Rio underneath some of the white washed slums you told me to wait there while you went for help, But of course you never returned discarding all responsibility glistening in the moonlight returning to your car and driving off like a panic led sprinter before I realised, Flying through the night across Copacabana beach pressing your hands on the wheels like Excalibur rising from the ground before freezing halfway, Cut and pasting your fear with each mile unsure which way next across the sea front towards the edge of the Sugarloaf Mountain, Then hiding in the shadows of the Art Museum in Sao Paulo, before then running   to the booths of the Se Church in Sao Luis, Among the Market sellers of the Porto Allegra Public Market in Rio Grande do Sol trading monies for blankets and hats, in a vein attempt to disguise yourself To smaller, less known places Like all the way down To Boa Vista Where your car finally died, And the Wreck of the Santa Maria Where you was tempted to hide in Or hide in the now dis-used lighthouse on Morro ***** and watch the sunrise go up and down each morning until you went stir crazy, Full well knowing I would caught up with you sooner or later no matter which way you ran Eventually.
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Nov 1, 2014
Nov 1, 2014 at 11:56 AM UTC
Frankenstein in Rio
Abandoned like an unloved pet just outside the outskirts of Rio underneath some of the white washed slums you told me to wait there while you went for help, But of course you never returned discarding all responsibility glistening in the moonlight returning to your car and driving off like a panic led sprinter before I realised, Flying through the night across Copacabana beach pressing your hands on the wheels like Excalibur rising from the ground before freezing halfway, Cut and pasting your fear with each mile unsure which way next across the sea front towards the edge of the Sugarloaf Mountain, Then hiding in the shadows of the Art Museum in Sao Paulo, before then running   to the booths of the Se Church in Sao Luis, Among the Market sellers of the Porto Allegra Public Market in Rio Grande do Sol trading monies for blankets and hats, in a vein attempt to disguise yourself To smaller, less known places Like all the way down To Boa Vista Where your car finally died, And the Wreck of the Santa Maria Where you was tempted to hide in Or hide in the now dis-used lighthouse on Morro ***** and watch the sunrise go up and down each morning until you went stir crazy, Full well knowing I would caught up with you sooner or later no matter which way you ran Eventually.
(An Writing Exercise at my writing workshop 'Writers of the third kind' designed to play a famous literature character in a total different location)
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Nov 1, 2014
Nov 1, 2014 at 11:56 AM UTC
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