Forget the cosy tale
its 3 in the morning
your a street artist,
no lines, no direction
only you, and the crowd
scary huh!
not everyone walks
the stage, so make
a scene and craft
slick approval
the adrenaline
brush fluffs up dizziness
coping on your feet
take a bow, listen
applause.
May 8, 2018
May 8, 2018 at 5:32 AM UTC
Forget the cosy tale
its 3 in the morning
your a street artist,
no lines, no direction
only you, and the crowd
scary huh!
not everyone walks
the stage, so make
a scene and craft
slick approval
the adrenaline
brush fluffs up dizziness
coping on your feet
take a bow, listen
applause.
I have tried to leave out direct images, metaphors to some extent and the regular beat to achieve a baldness. I guess narrative - the cosy tale - avoids a harshness of disappointment. What do you think?