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*Would you mind if I wrote you a love poem Would you care if I shared it with the world Would it be okay if I filled it with cliches As in I am the oyster and you are the pearl* ***Oh my, it'll be an absolute delight Go ahead, let the earth be smitten Let your words float in the twilight It'll be a beauty no one has ever written*** *I ask would it be too much If I compared your beauty to that of Spring flowers Or how I could just sit here and stare As I dreamly while away the hours* ***I'll be flushed with humility As I am just one of His thankful creations I'll allow your gaze even through infinity Admiring beyond my imperfections*** *Would it be to much to say That you put the night stars to shame If I had my very own galaxy On it I would place your name* ***You can ask the clouds and sky above How your words touched my heart to the core The unfeigned expression of your love I'm truly blessed, couldn't ask for more*** *While all above is true enough Against your beauty nature would lose I think instead I'll make this poem A simple "I love you"* Eudora Mike Hauser
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Nov 24, 2015
Nov 24, 2015 at 7:19 AM UTC
Would you mind if I wrote you a love poem?
*Would you mind if I wrote you a love poem Would you care if I shared it with the world Would it be okay if I filled it with cliches As in I am the oyster and you are the pearl* ***Oh my, it'll be an absolute delight Go ahead, let the earth be smitten Let your words float in the twilight It'll be a beauty no one has ever written*** *I ask would it be too much If I compared your beauty to that of Spring flowers Or how I could just sit here and stare As I dreamly while away the hours* ***I'll be flushed with humility As I am just one of His thankful creations I'll allow your gaze even through infinity Admiring beyond my imperfections*** *Would it be to much to say That you put the night stars to shame If I had my very own galaxy On it I would place your name* ***You can ask the clouds and sky above How your words touched my heart to the core The unfeigned expression of your love I'm truly blessed, couldn't ask for more*** *While all above is true enough Against your beauty nature would lose I think instead I'll make this poem A simple "I love you"* Eudora Mike Hauser
It is such an honor to be able to write with one of the brilliant poets here, Mike Hauser. Thank you so much Mike, for inviting me to do this collaboration. It was a lovely experience. YOU made it so easy! :)
eudora
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Nov 24, 2015
Nov 24, 2015 at 7:19 AM UTC
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