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The sky spilled colours that day thin rivers of red and gold sliding down the tired face of a concrete wall. A rain not meant for weather, but for souls brave enough to be touched by wonder. A man in a pressed black suit hurried beneath his umbrella, shielding himself from beauty as if it were a threat. His world was contracts, clocks, and the ache of staying clean. Colour to him was danger a risk, a stain he might never wash away. But a child stood just ahead, arms wide, heart wider, catching the falling colours as if they were blessings. Her small body glowing a candle lit by the rain. She did not fear the mess. She welcomed it. And between them, the paint kept falling, choosing who it would touch who would let it. Some walk through the world under umbrellas of caution. Others lift their faces and let life paint them until they become the art they were born to be.
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Nov 15, 2025
Nov 15, 2025 at 2:27 AM UTC
Coloured Rain
The sky spilled colours that day thin rivers of red and gold sliding down the tired face of a concrete wall. A rain not meant for weather, but for souls brave enough to be touched by wonder. A man in a pressed black suit hurried beneath his umbrella, shielding himself from beauty as if it were a threat. His world was contracts, clocks, and the ache of staying clean. Colour to him was danger a risk, a stain he might never wash away. But a child stood just ahead, arms wide, heart wider, catching the falling colours as if they were blessings. Her small body glowing a candle lit by the rain. She did not fear the mess. She welcomed it. And between them, the paint kept falling, choosing who it would touch who would let it. Some walk through the world under umbrellas of caution. Others lift their faces and let life paint them until they become the art they were born to be.
My interpretation of Banksy "Coloured Rain"
Marwan-Baytie
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56/M/Australia
Nov 15, 2025
Nov 15, 2025 at 2:27 AM UTC
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