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What is that swirling darkness, That velvety shroud of comfort? Falling slowly into an abyss, Devoid of all reality. Let me lie here, Let me slumber, Maybe dissolve into this blackness. This silence is music, A lust, I cannot comprehend. Let me rest, No, let me wander. A dreamland to discover, A temple for my insanity. Voices peak, Noises from afar, As a daunting fear settles in. A bounding pulse, a throbbing ache, As shadows begin to creep. Please, let me dream, Just let me be. Here, In this void, In this realm, There's no one who'll want to forget me.
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Mar 23, 2015
Mar 23, 2015 at 8:18 AM UTC
Syncope
What is that swirling darkness, That velvety shroud of comfort? Falling slowly into an abyss, Devoid of all reality. Let me lie here, Let me slumber, Maybe dissolve into this blackness. This silence is music, A lust, I cannot comprehend. Let me rest, No, let me wander. A dreamland to discover, A temple for my insanity. Voices peak, Noises from afar, As a daunting fear settles in. A bounding pulse, a throbbing ache, As shadows begin to creep. Please, let me dream, Just let me be. Here, In this void, In this realm, There's no one who'll want to forget me.
©Meenu Syriac Being a medical student, this was my poetic interpretation of a medical condition, as a result of my own experience with the same. More perspectives to medicine. Well, why not poetry!
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Mar 23, 2015
Mar 23, 2015 at 8:18 AM UTC
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