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You told me to write about us; I told you I was already writing about renal failure. I told you I could find a place to fit you in; I can make our love sound like it's destroying us from the inside out But truthfully, It's so unhealthy when we're together; I can slowly feel myself Unraveling And I know you feel it too. *Are we really that bad, that you have to refer to us as a failed ***** I told you how it wasn't an insult. Yet here I am slipping in metaphors about us anyways.
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Dec 10, 2014
Dec 10, 2014 at 8:36 PM UTC
Failure at Best
You told me to write about us; I told you I was already writing about renal failure. I told you I could find a place to fit you in; I can make our love sound like it's destroying us from the inside out But truthfully, It's so unhealthy when we're together; I can slowly feel myself Unraveling And I know you feel it too. *Are we really that bad, that you have to refer to us as a failed ***** I told you how it wasn't an insult. Yet here I am slipping in metaphors about us anyways.
You can fix yourself. When we're together we ruin ourselves.
hihaley
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Dec 10, 2014
Dec 10, 2014 at 8:36 PM UTC
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