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~ i recall the ward, smell of antiseptic and new paint blended, with the stench of dried on bandages, the smell of rotting flesh, the cries of men too old to cry, faces now, too burned for tears, could only wonder why. the clang of stainless steel bowls that held the closest thing to soothing, unquenchably thirsty skin. for these, souls sent off to war, though i was but a boy, my father, was a preacher, sent to save these men from hell... i knew already then hell was... a place already known, seen and felt; and flames... these men had walked. and when asked to pray, believe you me, pray i did, that these images, and these men... would all go away. ~ *post script. some chuckle when i, born in 1960, tell them i remember Vietnam.  yet i still weep when i remember.  Vietnam was to this young boy watching formations of fighter jets taking off for a battlefield he could not know; accompanying his father to visit with and pray for the GI’s in the burn ward of Sagami-Ono’s US Army Hospital near Yokohama, on the main island of Japan, a few minute’s drive from what we then called home.  the sights, sounds and smells of Vietnam are etched forever, without having ever set foot on it’s soil.  my five siblings have no such recollection, leading me to believe... either they were never invited or... their prayers were answered.*
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Feb 3, 2017
Feb 3, 2017 at 2:23 AM UTC
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~ i recall the ward, smell of antiseptic and new paint blended, with the stench of dried on bandages, the smell of rotting flesh, the cries of men too old to cry, faces now, too burned for tears, could only wonder why. the clang of stainless steel bowls that held the closest thing to soothing, unquenchably thirsty skin. for these, souls sent off to war, though i was but a boy, my father, was a preacher, sent to save these men from hell... i knew already then hell was... a place already known, seen and felt; and flames... these men had walked. and when asked to pray, believe you me, pray i did, that these images, and these men... would all go away. ~ *post script. some chuckle when i, born in 1960, tell them i remember Vietnam.  yet i still weep when i remember.  Vietnam was to this young boy watching formations of fighter jets taking off for a battlefield he could not know; accompanying his father to visit with and pray for the GI’s in the burn ward of Sagami-Ono’s US Army Hospital near Yokohama, on the main island of Japan, a few minute’s drive from what we then called home.  the sights, sounds and smells of Vietnam are etched forever, without having ever set foot on it’s soil.  my five siblings have no such recollection, leading me to believe... either they were never invited or... their prayers were answered.*
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Feb 3, 2017
Feb 3, 2017 at 2:23 AM UTC
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