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I enjoyed your winning poem. Congrats. R.L. Advice on Women A woman can be fragile thing What you need to know is they’re like a bee that can sting In your arms gentle and kind they may feel What’s inside to be feared is also real When you have that first kiss Your mind goes instantly to future bliss And that’s where the games begin The moment that intellect kicks in You think that you are on equal ground Until those thoughts are proven unsound For in a contest of wills She'll give you more than just the chills Long before the conversation is over you’re be worn out Making you want to scream and shout Every point made receives a counter punch It is far better to end it now and have lunch For women travel in a pack Are you ready for a group attack Though your ego will take a blow It is your manhood that must now show Once scorned it is better to go into retreat Revenge is not something to repeat For in the end you will lose it all From their graces you shall fall Better to live another day Than to end it some other way So there you have my advice at best Realizing I say all this in jest Andreas Simic©
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Jan 21, 2018
Jan 21, 2018 at 10:24 AM UTC
Advice on Women
I enjoyed your winning poem. Congrats. R.L. Advice on Women A woman can be fragile thing What you need to know is they’re like a bee that can sting In your arms gentle and kind they may feel What’s inside to be feared is also real When you have that first kiss Your mind goes instantly to future bliss And that’s where the games begin The moment that intellect kicks in You think that you are on equal ground Until those thoughts are proven unsound For in a contest of wills She'll give you more than just the chills Long before the conversation is over you’re be worn out Making you want to scream and shout Every point made receives a counter punch It is far better to end it now and have lunch For women travel in a pack Are you ready for a group attack Though your ego will take a blow It is your manhood that must now show Once scorned it is better to go into retreat Revenge is not something to repeat For in the end you will lose it all From their graces you shall fall Better to live another day Than to end it some other way So there you have my advice at best Realizing I say all this in jest Andreas Simic©
This poem was an entry for a poetry contest. The parameters provided were to write something from the perspective of a jilted lover.
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Jan 21, 2018
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