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Criticism is a law of life, and still, an awful price. It speaks for the best of men, and yet, crushes many dreams. It is an excellent reminder, for us to strive… work better. We may never win, as we take the test. We may please some, but never the rest. Facing criticism may be tough. We tend to break and lose all hopes. Better think of trees, bearing the most sweetest fruits. And of little boys, mischievous, hungry for sports. How they ignore trees without fruits, but love to throw at trees bearing fruits.
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Sep 7, 2011
Sep 7, 2011 at 4:40 AM UTC
Fruit Bearing Trees
Criticism is a law of life, and still, an awful price. It speaks for the best of men, and yet, crushes many dreams. It is an excellent reminder, for us to strive… work better. We may never win, as we take the test. We may please some, but never the rest. Facing criticism may be tough. We tend to break and lose all hopes. Better think of trees, bearing the most sweetest fruits. And of little boys, mischievous, hungry for sports. How they ignore trees without fruits, but love to throw at trees bearing fruits.
'Conquering criticism.' (c) MMV Abad @ Nov 18, 2009
mmv-abad
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Sep 7, 2011
Sep 7, 2011 at 4:40 AM UTC
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