I converse with 
The voices in my head 

They talk slowly 
So their guidance isn't misread

Ben99

Just a draft

Flush em out
and add some flesh
worthy of the prose
put em down, and throw em out
we're amateurs not
pros
;D

I bet either way its great.  I've come to enjoy concise work.

Der Ben, Let the voice of intuition from heart over take...

Words are good, no matter if long or short as long as it speaks ;-} Nice write.