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There is a time in space from which my past I trace- And try and place my hate on just a moment- I own it, its mine and I control it rewind and fast forward, pause it on the good parts for remembrance and reminisce except it’s a pestilence on whats left of it, ravaging calm into frenzy and believers into skeptics engorged passion pleads for action acting on rage we seek satisfaction only to realize we are cause and reaction affect the cause directly and cause effect to react steady only if eyes are open and minds are ready I fear that doubt trumps hope Hopefully hope doubts doubt as much as I doubt that it does
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Apr 9, 2010
Apr 9, 2010 at 11:34 PM UTC
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There is a time in space from which my past I trace- And try and place my hate on just a moment- I own it, its mine and I control it rewind and fast forward, pause it on the good parts for remembrance and reminisce except it’s a pestilence on whats left of it, ravaging calm into frenzy and believers into skeptics engorged passion pleads for action acting on rage we seek satisfaction only to realize we are cause and reaction affect the cause directly and cause effect to react steady only if eyes are open and minds are ready I fear that doubt trumps hope Hopefully hope doubts doubt as much as I doubt that it does
brett-berger
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Apr 9, 2010
Apr 9, 2010 at 11:34 PM UTC
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