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THAT  ADLESTROP  MOMENT Train stops. Stranding us in real life countryside. Townies gobsmacked. Silence attacks. The world melting in a heat haze. Where has our real reality gone? Tracks lead away from us be we are going nowhere fast. As if the future had ceased to exist. We are like the male member caught in the teeth of a too hastily done-up zip. Yep,,,,,,,doesn't go up! Oooops,,,,doesn't go down! A kestrel free of our dilemma. Laughs at us "Humans, eh....who'd 'ave 'em!" Smaller birds gossip discussing this all too human situation. I recite Adlestrop in my mind to my reflection staring dumbly back at me. "There is a countryside in my face..." I Marvell. As if Nature had invaded my physiognomy . "Unwontedly...something something something or other." Oh bother! "No one left and no one came." The birds stop to listen. "Yes, we remember Adlestrop!" they twitter. "Hear it one day in what you humans call the Past. Wot a laugh! They unaware that there is only one great big forever." I fell silent. Deserted by all thought. "Give us some more of that good old Adlestrop stuff! The birds chirrup. "No what less still and lonely fair through cloudlets in the sky." I ventured. "Naw...naw...naw mate!" a crow caws. "The bit 'bout us birds if you please!" I cough and continue. "Farther and farther, all the birds of Oxfordshire and Gloucestershire." The birds all cheep and cheer. "Hip hip hooray for Edward Thomas!" The train remembers itself. Rouses itself from its slumbers. As if all this had been but a dream. "Yes, I remember Adlestrop" But not all of it. It was June.
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Mar 21, 2018
Mar 21, 2018 at 6:22 PM UTC
THAT ADLESTROP MOMENT( for J. L. )
THAT  ADLESTROP  MOMENT Train stops. Stranding us in real life countryside. Townies gobsmacked. Silence attacks. The world melting in a heat haze. Where has our real reality gone? Tracks lead away from us be we are going nowhere fast. As if the future had ceased to exist. We are like the male member caught in the teeth of a too hastily done-up zip. Yep,,,,,,,doesn't go up! Oooops,,,,doesn't go down! A kestrel free of our dilemma. Laughs at us "Humans, eh....who'd 'ave 'em!" Smaller birds gossip discussing this all too human situation. I recite Adlestrop in my mind to my reflection staring dumbly back at me. "There is a countryside in my face..." I Marvell. As if Nature had invaded my physiognomy . "Unwontedly...something something something or other." Oh bother! "No one left and no one came." The birds stop to listen. "Yes, we remember Adlestrop!" they twitter. "Hear it one day in what you humans call the Past. Wot a laugh! They unaware that there is only one great big forever." I fell silent. Deserted by all thought. "Give us some more of that good old Adlestrop stuff! The birds chirrup. "No what less still and lonely fair through cloudlets in the sky." I ventured. "Naw...naw...naw mate!" a crow caws. "The bit 'bout us birds if you please!" I cough and continue. "Farther and farther, all the birds of Oxfordshire and Gloucestershire." The birds all cheep and cheer. "Hip hip hooray for Edward Thomas!" The train remembers itself. Rouses itself from its slumbers. As if all this had been but a dream. "Yes, I remember Adlestrop" But not all of it. It was June.
donall-dempsey
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Mar 21, 2018
Mar 21, 2018 at 6:22 PM UTC
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