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My first impressions were mind expanding, filled with crushing throngs of busy people all moving, their clamor and noise unrelenting. The enduring, evocative scents and smells of a culture thousands of years old and thriving. The wide mud brown life's blood Ganges River flowing through the heart of the city, filled with wooden crafts of all descriptions, people on the banks bathing, washing clothes, living, open funeral pyres burning, life and death laid bare for all eyes to see as it has been since Time Immemorial. On the street's flowers and music in abundance, women in colorful, to drab Sari dresses denoting their stature, along with some men in western attire but most in sarongs and open toed sandals. While walking the streets every few blocks the at first shocking sight of impoverished recently deceased bodies laid out on the sidewalks upon straw mats, swaddled in cloth wrappings awaiting donation offerings enough to pay for their funeral fires. Unaccustomed to seeing Westerners the people pause and stare as if we were from outer space visitors, if we stopped moving, unthreateningly and wide eyed they would surround us, perhaps unsure what they are seeing. A mutually curious encounter, Humanity visited up close and personal. Aw yes, I fondly remember India.
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Nov 14, 2022
Nov 14, 2022 at 7:30 PM UTC
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My first impressions were mind expanding, filled with crushing throngs of busy people all moving, their clamor and noise unrelenting. The enduring, evocative scents and smells of a culture thousands of years old and thriving. The wide mud brown life's blood Ganges River flowing through the heart of the city, filled with wooden crafts of all descriptions, people on the banks bathing, washing clothes, living, open funeral pyres burning, life and death laid bare for all eyes to see as it has been since Time Immemorial. On the street's flowers and music in abundance, women in colorful, to drab Sari dresses denoting their stature, along with some men in western attire but most in sarongs and open toed sandals. While walking the streets every few blocks the at first shocking sight of impoverished recently deceased bodies laid out on the sidewalks upon straw mats, swaddled in cloth wrappings awaiting donation offerings enough to pay for their funeral fires. Unaccustomed to seeing Westerners the people pause and stare as if we were from outer space visitors, if we stopped moving, unthreateningly and wide eyed they would surround us, perhaps unsure what they are seeing. A mutually curious encounter, Humanity visited up close and personal. Aw yes, I fondly remember India.
Few impressions are as vivid and lasting as my first days in India, the colors, activity and memories the likes of which I had never known before or since. Of all the countries I've had the pleasure of visiting India stands alone in drama and excitement. Three weeks in India 1973
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Nov 14, 2022
Nov 14, 2022 at 7:30 PM UTC
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