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Ten miles of white air: mentholated space ignited by the sun. The pea-soup fog becomes a crystal mist, reveals earth's face unshadowed, though the birds we catalogue are silhouettes and we are blackened sticks with muddy boots, like lumps of coal on snow. Enormous soul, or tiny? Take your pick. I had to go behind a bush you know, and saw the winter grasses curling, gray, like frozen fireworks waiting just for me to witness their patterned, subtle display. I pish a bit but no birds do I see. I'm happy anyway. I've seen the earth and know that every moment is its birth.
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Sep 2, 2016
Sep 2, 2016 at 8:37 AM UTC
Lake Meredith January 2011
Ten miles of white air: mentholated space ignited by the sun. The pea-soup fog becomes a crystal mist, reveals earth's face unshadowed, though the birds we catalogue are silhouettes and we are blackened sticks with muddy boots, like lumps of coal on snow. Enormous soul, or tiny? Take your pick. I had to go behind a bush you know, and saw the winter grasses curling, gray, like frozen fireworks waiting just for me to witness their patterned, subtle display. I pish a bit but no birds do I see. I'm happy anyway. I've seen the earth and know that every moment is its birth.
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Sep 2, 2016
Sep 2, 2016 at 8:37 AM UTC
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