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I met her first in the afternoon, in May, When the streets were crowed with people; living their lives. She stood leaning on an old green postbox. She was a friend of a friend. She said she had seen my face before somewhere, I was not so sure, I undoubtedly would have remembered hers. Her face was like an actress' from the '50's, one that was usually reserved in black and white or preserved in monochrome, Bette Davis style. But nonetheless it was there before me, in youth and charm. The way she spoke and pronounced certain words peculiarly, she was very like myself in that way. Its been said, that if you get everyone on Earth to stand in a line, one by one, that you will never find someone just like you. But I think that sometimes you come close, and I surmise that I came pretty close that day. I wanted to tell her, but did not; Knowing how absurd it would sound, I grasped it inside. She moved when she spoke, just a child would be all jittery and unable to stand still after too many sugary things. Always, there was that that hyper-activeness running through her body like electricity. But all the while, her voice was silk. She had my humor too, anytime I made jokes, she would laugh. It was such a brilliant laugh, the kind that poured out and poured out in big bursts and did not give a **** who heard or judged. Even when she was slightly smiling, you could still see her teeth, perfect and white, like a toothpaste advertisement. She was not afraid to look anyway at all. Her face was naked without makeup, she did not paint over any blemish at all. She knew that people had their flaws, and it was those people who laid their flaws bare to the world, they were the ones the brave ones. - Jamie F. Nugent
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May 21, 2016
May 21, 2016 at 12:12 PM UTC
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I met her first in the afternoon, in May, When the streets were crowed with people; living their lives. She stood leaning on an old green postbox. She was a friend of a friend. She said she had seen my face before somewhere, I was not so sure, I undoubtedly would have remembered hers. Her face was like an actress' from the '50's, one that was usually reserved in black and white or preserved in monochrome, Bette Davis style. But nonetheless it was there before me, in youth and charm. The way she spoke and pronounced certain words peculiarly, she was very like myself in that way. Its been said, that if you get everyone on Earth to stand in a line, one by one, that you will never find someone just like you. But I think that sometimes you come close, and I surmise that I came pretty close that day. I wanted to tell her, but did not; Knowing how absurd it would sound, I grasped it inside. She moved when she spoke, just a child would be all jittery and unable to stand still after too many sugary things. Always, there was that that hyper-activeness running through her body like electricity. But all the while, her voice was silk. She had my humor too, anytime I made jokes, she would laugh. It was such a brilliant laugh, the kind that poured out and poured out in big bursts and did not give a **** who heard or judged. Even when she was slightly smiling, you could still see her teeth, perfect and white, like a toothpaste advertisement. She was not afraid to look anyway at all. Her face was naked without makeup, she did not paint over any blemish at all. She knew that people had their flaws, and it was those people who laid their flaws bare to the world, they were the ones the brave ones. - Jamie F. Nugent
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May 21, 2016
May 21, 2016 at 12:12 PM UTC
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