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A saddened heart yet tears never flow... A reflection of grey within one's soul A feeling of longing, craving belonging And a path unknown, warily traveled alone As it takes a deep breath- a subtle sigh of despair Yet a dewy flame- a voice that whispers with care... A promise of comprehension & connection A promise of acknowledgement & acceptance "A place you could finally call home" In response a silent scream- a cry for anger unheard It clutches itself in pain unable to breathe "It may hurt to walk the path alone... but you never are truly alone "Grey skies may cloud us, ... yet growth comes from the rain. Regardless of what we face, ... memories of our loved ones still remain"
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Aug 22, 2024
Aug 22, 2024 at 4:45 PM UTC
Loneliness
A saddened heart yet tears never flow... A reflection of grey within one's soul A feeling of longing, craving belonging And a path unknown, warily traveled alone As it takes a deep breath- a subtle sigh of despair Yet a dewy flame- a voice that whispers with care... A promise of comprehension & connection A promise of acknowledgement & acceptance "A place you could finally call home" In response a silent scream- a cry for anger unheard It clutches itself in pain unable to breathe "It may hurt to walk the path alone... but you never are truly alone "Grey skies may cloud us, ... yet growth comes from the rain. Regardless of what we face, ... memories of our loved ones still remain"
Hello, my name is Asriel and this is my first poem. I'm aware I'm inexperienced, therefore any and every advice would be greatly appreciated
Asrielion-Star
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Aug 22, 2024
Aug 22, 2024 at 4:45 PM UTC
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