Critics have said " This is EXTRAORDINARY worldbuilding. The scope is insane." David L
" This introduction is gripping and full of intrigue. It sets up an intense, high-stakes world with vivid contrasts ...beauty and horror, intelligence and brutality, hope and doom. The mention of Gamleon's paradoxical nature is especially compelling. He isn't just another hero hmmm he's complex, burdened, and facing an unstoppable force. The looming flood adds an apocalyptic urgency, and the mention of the cavern hints at something far greater than mere survival. " Melanie Brewer - All Star Fantasy ( book review club)
"...One thing that stands out is the rhythm of the sentences it flows with an almost breathless intensity, pulling the reader deeper. The mix of mystery and revelation works well. There's enough information to entice, but so much remains unanswered: What else is in that cavern? How did the world come to this state? What exactly are the' true motives?
This feels like the start of something grand, both in scale and in theme.....
Brian Khalif-Hassam... Editor of Adventure and Fantasy treasures.
( Indie blog influencer)
Gamleon's Tail ~ Welcome to the worlds of : Within ~
Most Impressive Ranking
#
5
cool
out of 40.7K stories
Other Rankings
#
19
easy
out of 4.29K stories
#
3
innovative
out of 372 stories
#
52
fast
out of 6.32K stories
#
934
fun
out of 104K stories
#
438
fantasyadventure
out of 31.9K stories
#
108
steampunk
out of 6.85K stories
#
28
dungeons
out of 1.76K stories
#
641
mythology
out of 33.4K stories
#
23
captivating
out of 1.13K stories
#
72
dungeon
out of 3.05K stories
#
15
cataclysm
out of 304 stories
Oct 28, 2025
Oct 28, 2025 at 7:05 PM UTC
Critics have said " This is EXTRAORDINARY worldbuilding. The scope is insane." David L
" This introduction is gripping and full of intrigue. It sets up an intense, high-stakes world with vivid contrasts ...beauty and horror, intelligence and brutality, hope and doom. The mention of Gamleon's paradoxical nature is especially compelling. He isn't just another hero hmmm he's complex, burdened, and facing an unstoppable force. The looming flood adds an apocalyptic urgency, and the mention of the cavern hints at something far greater than mere survival. " Melanie Brewer - All Star Fantasy ( book review club)
"...One thing that stands out is the rhythm of the sentences it flows with an almost breathless intensity, pulling the reader deeper. The mix of mystery and revelation works well. There's enough information to entice, but so much remains unanswered: What else is in that cavern? How did the world come to this state? What exactly are the' true motives?
This feels like the start of something grand, both in scale and in theme.....
Brian Khalif-Hassam... Editor of Adventure and Fantasy treasures.
( Indie blog influencer)
Gamleon's Tail ~ Welcome to the worlds of : Within ~
Most Impressive Ranking
#
5
cool
out of 40.7K stories
Other Rankings
#
19
easy
out of 4.29K stories
#
3
innovative
out of 372 stories
#
52
fast
out of 6.32K stories
#
934
fun
out of 104K stories
#
438
fantasyadventure
out of 31.9K stories
#
108
steampunk
out of 6.85K stories
#
28
dungeons
out of 1.76K stories
#
641
mythology
out of 33.4K stories
#
23
captivating
out of 1.13K stories
#
72
dungeon
out of 3.05K stories
#
15
cataclysm
out of 304 stories
Thank you so much Brian ... Ans Melanie you have been great thank you for the kind words and support.....
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