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*"Constantly criticizing, annoying agitation, ignorant imbecile..."* I hate thinking this way but you give me no choice. If I don't speak with love, then what is my voice? I try to motivate and inspire, but you cause friction. My thoughts and actions are becoming a contradiction. **"Considerate carer, admirable artist, intelligent idol.**" I love that I say this to you, because it makes you think. Yet I wonder, "Will any of this message actually sink?" Maybe its because my poor conviction and dry emotion. No... it has to be more serious... its my lack of devotion.
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Sep 21, 2012
Sep 21, 2012 at 10:51 PM UTC
Conflict
*"Constantly criticizing, annoying agitation, ignorant imbecile..."* I hate thinking this way but you give me no choice. If I don't speak with love, then what is my voice? I try to motivate and inspire, but you cause friction. My thoughts and actions are becoming a contradiction. **"Considerate carer, admirable artist, intelligent idol.**" I love that I say this to you, because it makes you think. Yet I wonder, "Will any of this message actually sink?" Maybe its because my poor conviction and dry emotion. No... it has to be more serious... its my lack of devotion.
can't think of a title for it yet...
james-ellis
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Sep 21, 2012
Sep 21, 2012 at 10:51 PM UTC
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