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The room had gone dark the way silence goes dark when even the walls begin to listen. Rain kept speaking against the window. And I was there, alone as usual, sitting by the glass with your face drawn on the window-- not shaded, not finished, just a simple line of longing. Then lightning came. And for one impossible second the whole window filled with light as if the night itself had remembered your name. Your face did not look drawn anymore. It looked complete. Alive. Natural. As if the sky had stepped in to finish what my hand began. And your eyes—your eyes were the first thing the light touched. They filled the room without entering it. They arrived without coming near. I had never understood how beautiful a moment could be until darkness, rain, and one brief white fire made your presence visible on a window. Then it was gone. And the room fell back into itself. But something remained- not the light,not the storm, only the feeling that for one breath the universe had paused to let me see you through borrowed lightning. I wanted to hold that light. Not to keep the storm.Only to see your eyes the way nature sees them without effort,without shade, without asking anything to stay. But lightning does not stay.It only reveals. And maybe that is why ,it feels like love. .......!!!
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Apr 23
Apr 23, 2026 at 1:11 PM UTC
On the Window
The room had gone dark the way silence goes dark when even the walls begin to listen. Rain kept speaking against the window. And I was there, alone as usual, sitting by the glass with your face drawn on the window-- not shaded, not finished, just a simple line of longing. Then lightning came. And for one impossible second the whole window filled with light as if the night itself had remembered your name. Your face did not look drawn anymore. It looked complete. Alive. Natural. As if the sky had stepped in to finish what my hand began. And your eyes—your eyes were the first thing the light touched. They filled the room without entering it. They arrived without coming near. I had never understood how beautiful a moment could be until darkness, rain, and one brief white fire made your presence visible on a window. Then it was gone. And the room fell back into itself. But something remained- not the light,not the storm, only the feeling that for one breath the universe had paused to let me see you through borrowed lightning. I wanted to hold that light. Not to keep the storm.Only to see your eyes the way nature sees them without effort,without shade, without asking anything to stay. But lightning does not stay.It only reveals. And maybe that is why ,it feels like love. .......!!!
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to-her-who-already-knows
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Apr 23
Apr 23, 2026 at 1:11 PM UTC
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