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Alice waited in bed. She couldn't believe Mary was to be her new lady's maid. The nanny had told her the night before. Stern looking she had told her that Mary was to be her maid from now on. There seemed a kind of relief in the nanny's voice. Through the night, Alice thought of it. The limping thin girl was to be her own maid. The thin red hands to undo and do up her dresses and bathe her and wash her and take her places. Mary was in her own room in the attic. Nervous, she was all fingers and thumbs. The child was now her responsibility. No more washing up and working in the kitchen of the big house. Mrs Broadbeam was not happy about it. She would have to have another now to train as kitchen maid. Mary was happy about that. Maybe her red hands would have a chance to heal. She was dressed in the maid's dress the nanny had given her the night before. It was a bit too big, but it fitted and was better than the dresses she wore in the kitchen which smelt of cooking and sweat. She looked at herself in the old mirror. She licked her hair damp to get it to lay down. The white hat she had pinned to her hair. She smiled at her reflection. Alice sat up in bed as Mary entered. She looked different, but she still limped to the bed. Have you heard? Mary asked. Yes, Alice said, you're to be my own maid. Mary pulled back the bed covers with her red thin fingers and took Alice's hand gently. Best get you up and washed and dressed, Mary said. Will your hands get less red? Alice asked looking at the maid's hand holding hers. Hope so, Mary said. Alice walked with Mary to the wash bowl and Mary poured water in. Mary undressed Alice and so began the washing process. The warmed water was better than the cold water the nanny used when she did the task. The washing was gentle and calm, not forceful and hurtful as it was when the nanny did it. Alice missed her mother being there. No news of her since she had gone away. Mary was kind and thoughtful. She had washed Alice and dressed her. That's you all ***** and span, Mary said. ***** and span? Alice said. Neat and clean, Mary said. She looked into Mary's eyes. There was not the anger or darkness as was in the nanny's eyes. And when Mary took her hand there was not the pinching or squeezing like the nanny did. As Mary limped to the window to open it up, Alice watched her from behind, the loose fitting dress, black and white, the hair and white hat pinned, the red hand reaching for the window latch to let in air and Alice smiled to herself at the maid like an angel standing there.
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Jul 14, 2014
Jul 14, 2014 at 7:06 AM UTC
NEW LADY'S MAID.
Alice waited in bed. She couldn't believe Mary was to be her new lady's maid. The nanny had told her the night before. Stern looking she had told her that Mary was to be her maid from now on. There seemed a kind of relief in the nanny's voice. Through the night, Alice thought of it. The limping thin girl was to be her own maid. The thin red hands to undo and do up her dresses and bathe her and wash her and take her places. Mary was in her own room in the attic. Nervous, she was all fingers and thumbs. The child was now her responsibility. No more washing up and working in the kitchen of the big house. Mrs Broadbeam was not happy about it. She would have to have another now to train as kitchen maid. Mary was happy about that. Maybe her red hands would have a chance to heal. She was dressed in the maid's dress the nanny had given her the night before. It was a bit too big, but it fitted and was better than the dresses she wore in the kitchen which smelt of cooking and sweat. She looked at herself in the old mirror. She licked her hair damp to get it to lay down. The white hat she had pinned to her hair. She smiled at her reflection. Alice sat up in bed as Mary entered. She looked different, but she still limped to the bed. Have you heard? Mary asked. Yes, Alice said, you're to be my own maid. Mary pulled back the bed covers with her red thin fingers and took Alice's hand gently. Best get you up and washed and dressed, Mary said. Will your hands get less red? Alice asked looking at the maid's hand holding hers. Hope so, Mary said. Alice walked with Mary to the wash bowl and Mary poured water in. Mary undressed Alice and so began the washing process. The warmed water was better than the cold water the nanny used when she did the task. The washing was gentle and calm, not forceful and hurtful as it was when the nanny did it. Alice missed her mother being there. No news of her since she had gone away. Mary was kind and thoughtful. She had washed Alice and dressed her. That's you all ***** and span, Mary said. ***** and span? Alice said. Neat and clean, Mary said. She looked into Mary's eyes. There was not the anger or darkness as was in the nanny's eyes. And when Mary took her hand there was not the pinching or squeezing like the nanny did. As Mary limped to the window to open it up, Alice watched her from behind, the loose fitting dress, black and white, the hair and white hat pinned, the red hand reaching for the window latch to let in air and Alice smiled to herself at the maid like an angel standing there.
A NEW LADY'S MAID AND THE LITTLE GIRL ALICE IN 19TH CENTURY ENGLAND.
terry-collett
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Jul 14, 2014
Jul 14, 2014 at 7:06 AM UTC
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