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Language is the raw material Transformation into art Leaping through Alice’s looking glass Breaking metaphors apart Is it dark inside a poem From whence it first sprang Deeply repressed panic Without judgment rang Bringing pressured speech to light Images of love and pain Through clearly heightened senses Uninhibited refrain Where verbal acrobats spiral Words on a poet’s page That remind us and disturb us In desperate outrage With the pathos of a clown On a winding rocky path Reminders of death’s nearness Terror spinning with a laugh Pictures painted with premonitions An atmosphere heavy in despair Remnants of previous poets Are blinding the reader in its glare Quatrains moving merrily Using images and tone Making shapes with language Shaping irony unknown With tones bright and beautiful Its matrix darkly savage Through visual impressions The reader’s heart is ravaged Freedom of imagination From whimsy to terror can bring Surprising facetious word-play Delivering irony’s sting A psychological awakening The tenderest love infused with dread Blazing pathways joyous and dangerous Irrevocable loss lies ahead A telling detail without warning Takes us to disturbing turns The risky business of being born Poets’ authority burns It brings you to your senses Through supernatural realms Exploding realization Its resonance overwhelms Allusiveness to brutal honesty It may sometimes misconstrue In an abyss of isolation cries, “What else can a poem do?”
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Nov 19, 2018
Nov 19, 2018 at 2:09 PM UTC
Is it dark inside a poem?
Language is the raw material Transformation into art Leaping through Alice’s looking glass Breaking metaphors apart Is it dark inside a poem From whence it first sprang Deeply repressed panic Without judgment rang Bringing pressured speech to light Images of love and pain Through clearly heightened senses Uninhibited refrain Where verbal acrobats spiral Words on a poet’s page That remind us and disturb us In desperate outrage With the pathos of a clown On a winding rocky path Reminders of death’s nearness Terror spinning with a laugh Pictures painted with premonitions An atmosphere heavy in despair Remnants of previous poets Are blinding the reader in its glare Quatrains moving merrily Using images and tone Making shapes with language Shaping irony unknown With tones bright and beautiful Its matrix darkly savage Through visual impressions The reader’s heart is ravaged Freedom of imagination From whimsy to terror can bring Surprising facetious word-play Delivering irony’s sting A psychological awakening The tenderest love infused with dread Blazing pathways joyous and dangerous Irrevocable loss lies ahead A telling detail without warning Takes us to disturbing turns The risky business of being born Poets’ authority burns It brings you to your senses Through supernatural realms Exploding realization Its resonance overwhelms Allusiveness to brutal honesty It may sometimes misconstrue In an abyss of isolation cries, “What else can a poem do?”
Exploring the dark side of poetry, how poets are inspired to write, and how we're all standing on the shoulders of poets who've come before us. Also in honor of my oldest brother, Dan, who left me one poem before he died called, "Is it dark inside of snowballs?" which I've posted here before.
terry-jordan
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Nov 19, 2018
Nov 19, 2018 at 2:09 PM UTC
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