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I was the tides and you were the moon,                              you brought me too close all too soon and just like the tides all I can feel is the cold                              we suddenly came crashing to a unfortunate halt. You shouldn't have said you revolve round another                              my voice sounds so dull when before it was thunder if these words were lies I would surely paint them white                              because honestly baby, I just don't wanna fight. So please won't you stop rubbing salt in my wounds?                              I wish what we had could again be resumed however you are the moon and no doubt you'll move on                              I barely even had you and you're already gone. So your words are like anchors and I'm helplessly drowning                             my heart was so strong but you stopped its pounding.
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Sep 24, 2014
Sep 24, 2014 at 4:30 PM UTC
The Melancholy of the Tides
I was the tides and you were the moon,                              you brought me too close all too soon and just like the tides all I can feel is the cold                              we suddenly came crashing to a unfortunate halt. You shouldn't have said you revolve round another                              my voice sounds so dull when before it was thunder if these words were lies I would surely paint them white                              because honestly baby, I just don't wanna fight. So please won't you stop rubbing salt in my wounds?                              I wish what we had could again be resumed however you are the moon and no doubt you'll move on                              I barely even had you and you're already gone. So your words are like anchors and I'm helplessly drowning                             my heart was so strong but you stopped its pounding.
spoiler: the tides are me, and i'm paralysed without the moon.
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Sep 24, 2014
Sep 24, 2014 at 4:30 PM UTC
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