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I'm tired of Love lost, of cookie-cutter me missing you and all of the ridiculous rhymes that ensue. More and more I am fed up, plainly sick of inflated ego's insulated by chosen ignorance or inborn imbalances, maybe a history of inbreeding from a catalyst of parochial need. You are a parody of mental health shaping the shifting black and white to propound cheap love, I feel this as a slight. Committing any wisp of originality to become an unconscious marketing ploy, you're looking for glory in methods unlearned now butchered, bleeding clichés to stain pages and pages with your sullen insecurities. For that I name you an idiot, a slavering jowls dripping greedy soul. Comprehend there is no invalidation of your emotions, just a damning of self neglect and hidden pride in suffering   all laced with the unspoken demand for my respect.
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Dec 10, 2010
Dec 10, 2010 at 6:22 PM UTC
An Opinion: II
I'm tired of Love lost, of cookie-cutter me missing you and all of the ridiculous rhymes that ensue. More and more I am fed up, plainly sick of inflated ego's insulated by chosen ignorance or inborn imbalances, maybe a history of inbreeding from a catalyst of parochial need. You are a parody of mental health shaping the shifting black and white to propound cheap love, I feel this as a slight. Committing any wisp of originality to become an unconscious marketing ploy, you're looking for glory in methods unlearned now butchered, bleeding clichés to stain pages and pages with your sullen insecurities. For that I name you an idiot, a slavering jowls dripping greedy soul. Comprehend there is no invalidation of your emotions, just a damning of self neglect and hidden pride in suffering   all laced with the unspoken demand for my respect.
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Dec 10, 2010
Dec 10, 2010 at 6:22 PM UTC
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