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a strange feeling of emptiness, all I asked for was your tenderness, your gentleness, not for you to send me into a spiral of loneliness, not a human, just a collection of messiness, messy memories, messy emotions, messy life, you got me thinking about that knife, I'm just empty of life, should've had love, but all we have is a strife, once upon a time, our love was rife, why didn't we work out, we should have, a second chance, all I crave, I should already be in my grave, but somehow you managed to save, a soul that wanted out, days of your time, for me to spout, all you did was make me a lout, our love, meant to be stout, yet without a doubt, it all jumped off of a mount, I hate you, I love you, I want you, we were supposed to be "too good to be true", yet I'm left with a pile of your doo-doo.
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Aug 17, 2025
Aug 17, 2025 at 11:48 AM UTC
Doo-Doo
a strange feeling of emptiness, all I asked for was your tenderness, your gentleness, not for you to send me into a spiral of loneliness, not a human, just a collection of messiness, messy memories, messy emotions, messy life, you got me thinking about that knife, I'm just empty of life, should've had love, but all we have is a strife, once upon a time, our love was rife, why didn't we work out, we should have, a second chance, all I crave, I should already be in my grave, but somehow you managed to save, a soul that wanted out, days of your time, for me to spout, all you did was make me a lout, our love, meant to be stout, yet without a doubt, it all jumped off of a mount, I hate you, I love you, I want you, we were supposed to be "too good to be true", yet I'm left with a pile of your doo-doo.
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15/NB/The Grave
Aug 17, 2025
Aug 17, 2025 at 11:48 AM UTC
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