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You come to me and ask me for advice Let me tell you something I may be your friend your brother but I can't give you any I got enough issues myself I can't always help you with your problems I've thought about it over and over again I'm just not built that way Drowning in my own sorrow I've tried but my life isn't always iced sweet I've been abused before in ways you can't imagine My life is full of hatred an unfinished puzzle I've been to hell and back friends ask me for advice but I can't help them I got personal problems in my own life so go ahead and pass me that knife.
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Feb 10, 2014
Feb 10, 2014 at 3:40 PM UTC
Advice
You come to me and ask me for advice Let me tell you something I may be your friend your brother but I can't give you any I got enough issues myself I can't always help you with your problems I've thought about it over and over again I'm just not built that way Drowning in my own sorrow I've tried but my life isn't always iced sweet I've been abused before in ways you can't imagine My life is full of hatred an unfinished puzzle I've been to hell and back friends ask me for advice but I can't help them I got personal problems in my own life so go ahead and pass me that knife.
This is one of my first poems. Not really good but, just wanted to see if what other people say.
brandon-cook
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Feb 10, 2014
Feb 10, 2014 at 3:40 PM UTC
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