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Metal softly clinks on ceramic. Fingers joggle embossed grip, elevate blades toward moistened hide. Darkness covers the corner opposite antique coaster bed disheveled by fitful sleepers.   Her hair, twirled into tangles flows on the pillow, nasal noises mask the music of his movements. Any light might arouse her, awakening her to revive last night's squabble. Their endless feud over contentions long forgotten   encircles their days. Blades glide over chin and cheeks.   Shaving quietly in darkness avoids anger in the morning.
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Dec 30, 2012
Dec 30, 2012 at 3:03 PM UTC
Shaving in the Dark
Metal softly clinks on ceramic. Fingers joggle embossed grip, elevate blades toward moistened hide. Darkness covers the corner opposite antique coaster bed disheveled by fitful sleepers.   Her hair, twirled into tangles flows on the pillow, nasal noises mask the music of his movements. Any light might arouse her, awakening her to revive last night's squabble. Their endless feud over contentions long forgotten   encircles their days. Blades glide over chin and cheeks.   Shaving quietly in darkness avoids anger in the morning.
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william-a-poppen
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89/M/American
Dec 30, 2012
Dec 30, 2012 at 3:03 PM UTC
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