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A secret among friends Amongst myself Since you know not how I feel So here goes... How I feel.... You're a flower at first bloom Quietly beautiful Commanding nothing of no one But sure of yourself and your beauty Needing nothing from anyone I'd give you the love I share for you, if I could Not that you need it, But you deserve it, For you are an amazing woman Unappreciated I fear You are what a woman should be confident, strong, a diamond in the rough Though not so rough Quite refined, as I see From my perspective You are a perfect gem Colorless (though colorful to me) Cut (perfectly) Clarity (uncomplicated unlike most) In all your glory In all your beauty You are perfect to me ...melanie
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Apr 14, 2015
Apr 14, 2015 at 2:23 AM UTC
Melanie (in all your beauty)
A secret among friends Amongst myself Since you know not how I feel So here goes... How I feel.... You're a flower at first bloom Quietly beautiful Commanding nothing of no one But sure of yourself and your beauty Needing nothing from anyone I'd give you the love I share for you, if I could Not that you need it, But you deserve it, For you are an amazing woman Unappreciated I fear You are what a woman should be confident, strong, a diamond in the rough Though not so rough Quite refined, as I see From my perspective You are a perfect gem Colorless (though colorful to me) Cut (perfectly) Clarity (uncomplicated unlike most) In all your glory In all your beauty You are perfect to me ...melanie
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Apr 14, 2015
Apr 14, 2015 at 2:23 AM UTC
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