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Do not love, Half lover Do not preach, Orator Preaching half truths Do not dream, Get by-er Dreaming half dreams Do not work, Ease-seeker Working half heartedly And when around you; Half dreamers, and half preachers, and half workers Do not succumb Do not conform Do not become Do not seek, O contented one Seeking to be different Do not aspire, O common one Aspiring to be remembered Do not pretend, O masked one Pretending to be what you’re not And when around you; Contented ones, and ordinary ones, and masked ones Do not conflate Do not adopt Do not plate Do not achieve, Self-obsessor Achieving, Then justifying Do not think, Deluder Thinking, Then fooling Do not write, Flaunter Writing, Then showing And when around you; Self-obsessors and deluders and flaunters Do not get wooed nor woo Do not rationalize Do not do Do not confide, Manipulator Confiding half-thoughts Do not judge, O fragile one Judging, to be righteous Do not promise, Oathbreaker Promising, Then go forgetting Do not undermine When within- You praise Do not boast honesty When you hide so Nor of the latter For that is not any better And when in you; A confider and manipulator A judging one, and a fragile one A promiser and oathbreaker An undermining one, and a praising one A truthful one, and a hider You find, Then- Do not confide, Only to then manipulate Do not judge, Only to then be fragile Do not promise, Only to then, Oath-break Do not undermine, Only to then, Yourself praise Do not hide, Only to then, of it, be honest Choose Half-lover
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Sep 16, 2025
Sep 16, 2025 at 5:51 PM UTC
Confessions
Do not love, Half lover Do not preach, Orator Preaching half truths Do not dream, Get by-er Dreaming half dreams Do not work, Ease-seeker Working half heartedly And when around you; Half dreamers, and half preachers, and half workers Do not succumb Do not conform Do not become Do not seek, O contented one Seeking to be different Do not aspire, O common one Aspiring to be remembered Do not pretend, O masked one Pretending to be what you’re not And when around you; Contented ones, and ordinary ones, and masked ones Do not conflate Do not adopt Do not plate Do not achieve, Self-obsessor Achieving, Then justifying Do not think, Deluder Thinking, Then fooling Do not write, Flaunter Writing, Then showing And when around you; Self-obsessors and deluders and flaunters Do not get wooed nor woo Do not rationalize Do not do Do not confide, Manipulator Confiding half-thoughts Do not judge, O fragile one Judging, to be righteous Do not promise, Oathbreaker Promising, Then go forgetting Do not undermine When within- You praise Do not boast honesty When you hide so Nor of the latter For that is not any better And when in you; A confider and manipulator A judging one, and a fragile one A promiser and oathbreaker An undermining one, and a praising one A truthful one, and a hider You find, Then- Do not confide, Only to then manipulate Do not judge, Only to then be fragile Do not promise, Only to then, Oath-break Do not undermine, Only to then, Yourself praise Do not hide, Only to then, of it, be honest Choose Half-lover
This is the 2nd poem I have ever written and is inpired from Khalil Gibran's "Do not love, half lovers" poem (Although I have not read it, I only know of the first line). I didnt read it more because i didnt want it to influence me too much while writing this. P.S: The whole poem is just me talking to myself.
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16/M/Pakistan
Sep 16, 2025
Sep 16, 2025 at 5:51 PM UTC
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