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Our toes were in the sand,... when I saw your eyes ...fade Something in the timing of your...blink ...something vacant in all//that//green So vivid; the moment//sepia tone Poloroid in my brain. ...more honestly,...I felt it,... mostly You had stopped seeing ///me. Ohhhhh,... you let~me~love~you one.more.time. You rushed in and then.you.were.out. {how you always liked to Come and go}. And there was little ten/der/ness in it Your eyes had always pul(owned)led me in... Until. that. Mo/ment ...and I Knew. It was over. .
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Oct 17, 2015
Oct 17, 2015 at 8:45 PM UTC
dog beach
Our toes were in the sand,... when I saw your eyes ...fade Something in the timing of your...blink ...something vacant in all//that//green So vivid; the moment//sepia tone Poloroid in my brain. ...more honestly,...I felt it,... mostly You had stopped seeing ///me. Ohhhhh,... you let~me~love~you one.more.time. You rushed in and then.you.were.out. {how you always liked to Come and go}. And there was little ten/der/ness in it Your eyes had always pul(owned)led me in... Until. that. Mo/ment ...and I Knew. It was over. .
Mly
TreadingWater
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Oct 17, 2015
Oct 17, 2015 at 8:45 PM UTC
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