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I left a note on your car today, 
it sat alone in the parking lot 
like an abandoned century,
 set in place to guard the lost
 and the broken hearted.  The note wasn’t enough,
 scraps of paper and shreds 
of words can’t hold fast 
to long lost dreams of simplicity 
tainted with the purest hope. I drove away, staring straight
 ahead because if I looked back, 
I always look back, I knew
 I’d watch it’s tattered edges
 burn from the fire left behind.
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May 5, 2012
May 5, 2012 at 2:19 PM UTC
Embers
I left a note on your car today, 
it sat alone in the parking lot 
like an abandoned century,
 set in place to guard the lost
 and the broken hearted.  The note wasn’t enough,
 scraps of paper and shreds 
of words can’t hold fast 
to long lost dreams of simplicity 
tainted with the purest hope. I drove away, staring straight
 ahead because if I looked back, 
I always look back, I knew
 I’d watch it’s tattered edges
 burn from the fire left behind.
julia-low
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American
May 5, 2012
May 5, 2012 at 2:19 PM UTC
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