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I was five hours through my trip of eight When I saw through bug guts light tearing cloud I was thinking about clips sent my way Of her play with the offspring of her own Laughing without regard for somber weight Which hung on us like a funeral shroud Her spirit was ready were it the day She was prepared if then she would have flown But how it closed with a coffin lid’s freight What tears under such sorrow we allowed In front of his daughter dying he lay Soon enough I’d have his pictures alone In the light I saw insects smashed to death “Three hours left” I said under my breath
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May 3, 2025
May 3, 2025 at 6:06 PM UTC
I would have washed it if not for the rain.
I was five hours through my trip of eight When I saw through bug guts light tearing cloud I was thinking about clips sent my way Of her play with the offspring of her own Laughing without regard for somber weight Which hung on us like a funeral shroud Her spirit was ready were it the day She was prepared if then she would have flown But how it closed with a coffin lid’s freight What tears under such sorrow we allowed In front of his daughter dying he lay Soon enough I’d have his pictures alone In the light I saw insects smashed to death “Three hours left” I said under my breath
An attempt at a chiastic sonnet. My grandfather died in late 2011, and my grandmother passed a little over ten years later. I thought about these things on a drive home from college.
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May 3, 2025
May 3, 2025 at 6:06 PM UTC
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