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**Like a hit of sudden thunder,                                            I climaxed,                   saw an alluring flush                 spread across her face                     turning it to a lotus-- an adornment of ******** bliss. An ancient moment dawned before my  drooping, placid eyes--- a caveman's loud moans and cries as he reached the pleasure's peak with his consort,          echo on the cave walls, again and again**.
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Jun 16, 2013
Jun 16, 2013 at 8:39 AM UTC
She and I recapture a primeval moment
**Like a hit of sudden thunder,                                            I climaxed,                   saw an alluring flush                 spread across her face                     turning it to a lotus-- an adornment of ******** bliss. An ancient moment dawned before my  drooping, placid eyes--- a caveman's loud moans and cries as he reached the pleasure's peak with his consort,          echo on the cave walls, again and again**.
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Jun 16, 2013
Jun 16, 2013 at 8:39 AM UTC
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