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Cold in the woods by the mall Nerves taut like a deer ready to flee at any moment If I perceive danger I'm out of here Martin was fumbling around with the bottle "you have to but a carb in it" "Shut up Jake, I know what I'm doing" He didn't neither of us did it was the first time nothing like it I hoped my dad wouldn't miss his socket wrench piece We passed it around like the natives that walked this land under the gaze of oppression but we were free for at least that moment I vibrated like a rocket ship and when I walked I felt as if I was on an airport moving walkway We went into the sports store riding around on the skateboards and punching the punching bags flipped into a world of upside down terror when they made me get on the abs exercise machine mall security came and kicked us out but we didn't care we had just discovered something so much better.
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Feb 18, 2013
Feb 18, 2013 at 1:47 PM UTC
David: Ninth Grade
Cold in the woods by the mall Nerves taut like a deer ready to flee at any moment If I perceive danger I'm out of here Martin was fumbling around with the bottle "you have to but a carb in it" "Shut up Jake, I know what I'm doing" He didn't neither of us did it was the first time nothing like it I hoped my dad wouldn't miss his socket wrench piece We passed it around like the natives that walked this land under the gaze of oppression but we were free for at least that moment I vibrated like a rocket ship and when I walked I felt as if I was on an airport moving walkway We went into the sports store riding around on the skateboards and punching the punching bags flipped into a world of upside down terror when they made me get on the abs exercise machine mall security came and kicked us out but we didn't care we had just discovered something so much better.
harry-j-baxter
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Feb 18, 2013
Feb 18, 2013 at 1:47 PM UTC
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